In: Video Projects
5 Jun 2009
So, as promissed hereby the English version of the script for the short film Letting Go. Recently I found several actors and I now have a chance of doing it in English or in Dutch. More updates including various photo’s at the locations soon.
SCRIPT ‘LETTING GO’
Jaap Ruurd Feitsma
M = Man
W = Woman
M is waiting in the park. He is surrounded by the green colours from the trees and the grass of the park. Around him he can hear many birds singing. In the back stands a high weaping willow. Then, suddenly in front of him stands W. She smiles to him, tenderly. ‘Hey,’ She says. M answers. ‘Hey’. And he smiles mildly back at her, as if he can’t really believe the fact that she is here. ‘I missed you,’ M says. ‘I missed you too,’ W says, still smiling kindly. And then they hug each other. M exhales with a deep sigh and he says ‘so much..’ during the sigh. V smiles softly. They release each other from their hug and they hold each others hands instead. M is making a fairly troubled face by now. ‘you’re coming with me, aren’t you?’ And W replies: “Off course I’m coming with you, silly!” M seems relieved about this and says “Thank god,” in a relieved way. “I find it really hard going there by myself”. W nods because she understands his problem and smiles to him. “I know. Don’t worry, baby. I’m here with you. I always am, aren’t I? “Yes,” M says. And smiles back. “That’s true”. “It’s time to go, baby” W says, still smiling. M sighs deep again and looks a bit sad now. “OK,” he says. “I’m ready..” They turn around and start to walk hand in hand to whatever it is that they are going.
Together they walk through the green park past great trees, ponds and fountains. The park has some soft gliding hills and past the park is broad canal. From the otherside of it the soft hills are well seen. It is almost like a make believe country, but the longer they walk, the less green their surrounding gets. Then suddenly they stop, still holding each others hands. ‘We’re here’ Says W. She turns to him and W takes his other hand now as well. M sighs deep now, as if he really finds himself in trouble. ‘Yes’ he says. ‘It’s ok,’ says W. ‘Time to let go, baby’. M is looking sad at W. ‘I know’, says M. And he smiles softly at W. ‘It is time to let go’ says M, more to himself then to W. He inhales with his mouth and at the same moment he closes his eyes. When he opens them again, W has dissapeared.
He looks around but there is no one to be found. He looks down and in his hand he holds a bouquet of flowers. He smiles briefly, as if he found his peace with it all and then slowly turns around. He walks toward graveyard past several toombstones with the flowers in his hand, on his way to the stone that belongs to W.
11 Responses to Short Film Script ‘Letting Go’ English version
Kim Kristine
June 14th, 2009 at 15:23
I’ve totally fallen in love with this script. Hmm!!
Jaap Ruurd
June 14th, 2009 at 16:48
thanks
i’ll let you know if a spot opens up! and otherwise you’re more than welcome to join on the set to have a look if you like
hasan
June 15th, 2009 at 19:57
i am sure it will be awesome… but in someway, it need a bit more concantrate… basic and nice! bravo dude…
Jaap Ruurd Feitsma
June 15th, 2009 at 22:06
I think I understand what you mean. But the reason I wrote it like this is because I want it to be very slow going. I mean; like a very slow rhythm that carries you away, almost like a vivid dream. in a way, it is
Koen
June 16th, 2009 at 16:03
It’s nice, although there isn’t a lot of dialog, even less would maybe be more?
Jaap Ruurd Feitsma
June 16th, 2009 at 18:08
I see what you mean. I put in the short dialogues because I really want to play with various points of view during the shoot.. medium shots, close ups and paralel shots. there’s not much dialogue indeed, but enough to work on several of these diverse shots during it. In a way, with less it could be more. also because it might be better balanced.
Alba
July 13th, 2009 at 00:46
love it! can’t wait to watch it!
Jaap Ruurd Feitsma
July 13th, 2009 at 12:57
thanks!
I’m currently in Post Production. The biggest things that need my attention now is the sound and the music
Pınar Çelik
September 11th, 2009 at 13:22
The story is so dramatic and impressive. I m sure it will have more meaning than words. I m looking forward to listen the songs and watch. Well done. TEBRİKLER;) Congratulations to all of the team.
Btw, Hoi Koen;)
Jaap Ruurd Feitsma
September 11th, 2009 at 15:38
Çok teşekkür ederim, dostum. Bu benim için çok şey ifade
Ben en kısa zamanda size göndermek için gidiyorum
Jaap Ruurd Feitsma
September 11th, 2009 at 15:41
i hope that was good turkish…